Darling Dreadful: A Novel

Original content: As she walked down the street, she noticed a cat sitting on the porch of a nearby house. The cat looked at her with its big green eyes and let out a soft meow. She stopped and bent down to pet the cat, feeling its soft fur under her fingers. The cat purred in contentment and rubbed against her leg before slowly walking away.

Revised content: Walking down the street, she spotted a cat sitting on the porch of a nearby house. With its big green eyes, the cat gazed at her and softly meowed. Pausing, she knelt down to stroke the cat, relishing the feel of its soft fur beneath her fingers. The cat purred happily and nuzzled against her leg before leisurely sauntering off.

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